Sunday, April 26, 2009

Act I Feedback

Thank you all for contributing. Consider the questions for Act I closed. Everyone took the writing seriously so there was no need for me to assess the seriousness of your responses. If you answered all three of the questions I have awarded you full credit. 

I also learned a lot about you guys from your answers, like Beto's phobia of masks and how Jerry's mother gives advice a bit like Polonius.  Also, Carlos, that line about friends and tattoos is profound.  Thank you all for being so honest.

Couple of warnings:

1. In other classes there were some nameless entries. Don't lose points this way.
2. In English, "advice" is a collective noun which means that it can not take a plural form.  So, your father can give you lots of advice through out your life or perhaps he gave you an important piece of advice last night ... but he can't give you "advices."  Got it? 
3. I will check the questions for Acts 2 and 3 later this week, so be careful not to fall behind.

Keep up the good work,

-Mr. Paul

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